a guy i like wrote a poem, and posted it on his myspace.
What does it mean? we r both 14. I find it really confusing
Only Lust I Can
Never Will I Know
What Could Have Been
If I Couldn't Show
The Way That I Feel
The Fights That I'll Take
If I Wanted To
The Trust I Would Need
If I Told In The Dark
The Doors Are Clsoed
Nearing Rot
The Fright I Would Feel
If They Burst Open
Revealing Half Of Me
I See You
But Cannot Have You
I Know You
But Can't Intwine
The Forbidden Fate Towards You
Locked
So My Doors WIll Remain Shut
My Fists Left Clenched
I'll Take That
And Keep This
And Cherish The Rest
thanks in advance
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
It sounds like he's lusting after a sister, or maybe a sister of a friend, who he feels he can't touch.
And he needs a lot of practise in getting his thoughts down clearly and concisely.
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
That's really bad. Find someone who can write.
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
either he really likes u or wants to have sex
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
He cannot be with the person that he wants!
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
You should be very careful around this guy. It sounds like he feels trapped because he is not getting any sex from you. Do not have sex just to keep a man. Be true to yourself.
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
It seems to say that he cannot have someone or something that he wants.
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
Sounds like this guy likes you, but for some reason he feels like he can never be with you. So the poem is reflecting his frustration and he's got a special place in his heart for you.
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
He's confused, and it sounds like he took titles of love songs and put them all together...they don't rhyme or make sense really. Strange, for a 14 year old guy....
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
i think he likes this girl, and wants her sexually and i guess emotionally too, but he can never have her, he will do anything to get her, have fights, etc. and even if he wins a fight he will not get her, but she would notice him. ("revealing half of me"). in the end he understands that he cannot have her, her door is shut and so is his (locked) like he wont try again?. but he still wants her (fist left clenched). BEATs ME
What on earth is this guy trying to say with this poem?
It seems to me that he's really frustrated about a forbidden love that if revealed would destroy him, but yet is destorying him on the inside because he still cares about the object of his affection. It seems to me that he might be "in the closet" so to speak. Alot of "doors" "doors shut" keep popping up and why would he be scared if people found out about this??? He maybe gay or simply confused when writting this. But maybe I'm looking to far into this. Anywho, hope this helps a little.
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